Sunday, November 26, 2006

thoughts
fall with snowflakes
to the ground
leaving foot prints
soon to disappear

5 Comments:

Blogger Alan Summers said...

I like this very much!

I wonder if you might consider dropping one 'ing' though?

thoughts
fall with snowflakes
to the ground
leaving foot prints
soon to disappear

4:08 pm  
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

good idea - thanks

6:46 pm  
Blogger Alan Summers said...

I wish I could write tanka!

I'll keep this with me for when it snows where I live.

I often get up real early so as to beat all the foot damage happening on the first fall of snow! ;-)

9:16 pm  
Blogger littlepurplecow said...

I like this too.

3:34 pm  
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

thank you both ===
Alan- I'm not ready for snow at all! :)

12:51 am  

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