thoughts
fall with snowflakes
to the ground
leaving foot prints
soon to disappear
fall with snowflakes
to the ground
leaving foot prints
soon to disappear
posted by J. Andrew Lockhart at 4:33 am
Sunday, November 26, 2006
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4 Comments:
I like this very much!
I wonder if you might consider dropping one 'ing' though?
thoughts
fall with snowflakes
to the ground
leaving foot prints
soon to disappear
good idea - thanks
I wish I could write tanka!
I'll keep this with me for when it snows where I live.
I often get up real early so as to beat all the foot damage happening on the first fall of snow! ;-)
thank you both ===
Alan- I'm not ready for snow at all! :)
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