Sunday, November 05, 2006

through the fog
the squeak- thump- squeak
of a milkman's cart

-angelee

3 Comments:

Blogger sangeet said...

Evocative!

8:38 pm  
Blogger Alan Summers said...

I enjoyed the sound from this haiku. We don't often have sound in haiku.

It also brought back memories of my milk run as a child, and trying not to slip on the icy roads with glass bottles of milk!

12:50 pm  
Blogger angelee said...

thank you dear sangeet,dear alan
love
angelee

12:42 pm  

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