Saturday, November 18, 2006

troops embark
...new leaves
fall onto dead ones

5 Comments:

Blogger laryalee said...

So moving, John...
well done!
Lary

4:28 am  
Blogger Alan Summers said...

Fine, and very current.

Should it be:

troops embark
...new leaves
fall onto dead ones

?????

Do you have this in Scots as well? It is such a beautifully visual language, and I enjoy James at Oppo} reading them out to me! ;-)

4:57 pm  
Blogger John McDonald said...

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6:15 pm  
Blogger John McDonald said...

yes Alan it should read onto thanks for noticing
the scots:-
sodgers ship oot
...new leaves
fa ontae deid yins

thanks again, John

(mistake in the 6:15 comment)

6:35 pm  
Blogger sangeet said...

Moving!

2:30 pm  

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