Winter Haiku 2006

Saturday, November 18, 2006

troops embark
...new leaves
fall onto dead ones

laryalee said...: So moving, John...
well done!
Lary; 4:28 am
Area 17 said...: Fine, and very current.

Should it be:

troops embark
...new leaves
fall onto dead ones

?????

Do you have this in Scots as well? It is such a beautifully visual language, and I enjoy James at Oppo} reading them out to me! ;-); 4:57 pm
John McDonald said...: This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.; 6:15 pm
John McDonald said...: yes Alan it should read onto thanks for noticing
the scots:-
sodgers ship oot
...new leaves
fa ontae deid yins

thanks again, John

(mistake in the 6:15 comment); 6:35 pm
sangeet said...: Moving!; 2:30 pm