Friday, November 10, 2006

withering wind
heads bowed in and out
of church

angelee

5 Comments:

Blogger Alan Summers said...

Very very good haiku, very strong and imagistic, and I can feel both the wind outside, and the air inside the church.

Fantastic!

1:56 pm  
Blogger laryalee said...

Oh yes, this is simply splendid, Angelee!
:-)
Lary

7:01 am  
Blogger angelee said...

thank you for your kind words Alan and Laryalee,the feedback is much appreciated,love ,angelee

5:06 am  
Blogger sangeet said...

Lovely!

5:21 pm  
Blogger polona said...

ah... excellent!

7:12 pm  

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