stiff winter grasses
nothing moving but the wind
old men's bones cracking
nothing moving but the wind
old men's bones cracking
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3 Comments:
so are mine! :)
Hey John,this is a good haiku...
how about this...yours reads well but tells all...
old men's bones -
nothing but the wind moves
on stiff winter grasses
love,
angelee
thanks for comment angelee and andrew
yes, this one stems from my strict 5-7-5 days
john
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