Saturday, December 02, 2006

stiff winter grasses
nothing moving but the wind
old men's bones cracking

3 Comments:

Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

so are mine! :)

9:39 pm  
Blogger angelee said...

Hey John,this is a good haiku...
how about this...yours reads well but tells all...

old men's bones -
nothing but the wind moves
on stiff winter grasses

love,
angelee

2:50 pm  
Blogger John McDonald said...

thanks for comment angelee and andrew
yes, this one stems from my strict 5-7-5 days
john

11:23 am  

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