Wednesday, December 27, 2006

train whistle
along the horizon
snow clouds


Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

Lovely haiku! Very concise and atmospheric.

9:14 am  
Blogger John McDonald said...

nice I love the harmonica wail of american trains

9:21 am  
Blogger Roswila said...

So do I, John. And for some reason the day I wrote this one the trains had been whistling by in the distance far more frequently than usual. I was delighted when the 'ku presented itself to be written! :-)

5:43 pm  

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