Thursday, January 11, 2007

north wind

north wind...
her voice

5 Comments:

Blogger WorkingWords100 said...

I want to hear more from the North Wind.

6:39 pm  
Blogger Roswila said...

:-) I'm not sure I want to hear more from that wind .... a suggestion alone is chilling ....

Nice ku, IMHO

6:58 pm  
Blogger extraspecialbitter said...

thanks for the comments. the haiku is definitely minimalistic; I guess the question centers around whether or not there's just enough content to make a lingering impression...

2:17 pm  
Blogger Aurora said...

I think it's excellent, and would also make a dynamite one-liner.

4:59 pm  
Blogger Roswila said...

Yes, definitely a one-liner! Good suggestion.

7:56 pm  

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