A community of Haiku poets recording and sharing their experiences of Winter 2006 in Haiku, Tanka, Haiga, Haibun and Senyru.
north wind...her voice
posted by extraspecialbitter at 4:15 am
I want to hear more from the North Wind.
:-) I'm not sure I want to hear more from that wind .... a suggestion alone is chilling ....Nice ku, IMHO
thanks for the comments. the haiku is definitely minimalistic; I guess the question centers around whether or not there's just enough content to make a lingering impression...
I think it's excellent, and would also make a dynamite one-liner.
Yes, definitely a one-liner! Good suggestion.
Post a Comment
<< Home
5 Comments:
I want to hear more from the North Wind.
:-) I'm not sure I want to hear more from that wind .... a suggestion alone is chilling ....
Nice ku, IMHO
thanks for the comments. the haiku is definitely minimalistic; I guess the question centers around whether or not there's just enough content to make a lingering impression...
I think it's excellent, and would also make a dynamite one-liner.
Yes, definitely a one-liner! Good suggestion.
Post a Comment
<< Home