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posted by John McDonald at 11:15 am
I love that nibble at little puffs of steamNot sure about the line break in line two though?What about something like:frosted fieldsthe cattle nibblelittle puffs of steam???
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I love that
nibble at little puffs of steam
Not sure about the line break in line two though?
What about something like:
frosted fields
the cattle nibble
little puffs of steam
???
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