Monday, November 06, 2006

frosted fields
cattle nibble at
little puffs of steam

2 Comments:

Blogger Alan Summers said...

I love that
nibble at little puffs of steam

Not sure about the line break in line two though?

What about something like:

frosted fields
the cattle nibble
little puffs of steam


???

4:05 pm  
Blogger Norman Darlington said...

This is beautiful! Well done.

12:34 am  

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