Wednesday, December 06, 2006

winter burial
everybody's breath
clouds the coffin

5 Comments:

Blogger Alan Summers said...

John, this is very powerful.

Mine is also a winter haiku, mid-november 1994, when my father died.


the rain
almost a friend
this funeral


Alan Summers

1:19 pm  
Blogger John McDonald said...

beautiful alan
john

2:31 pm  
Blogger Jim Collette said...

Great image.

3:32 am  
Blogger littlepurplecow said...

john and alan - love them both

4:35 am  
Blogger angelee said...

john and Alan,very well done,love
angelee

6:34 am  

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