the warmth is gone
the warmth is gone,
chased away by the rain
and wind-
writing at midnight
with swollen and stiff knuckles
chased away by the rain
and wind-
writing at midnight
with swollen and stiff knuckles
posted by J. Andrew Lockhart at 6:11 am
1 Comments:
I really like this!
I wonder if lines 4 & 5 could be something like:
I write at midnight
with swollen stiff knuckles
To increase the immediacy even more?
It's a lovely dynamic poem, I only wish you didn't suffer for your art! ;-)
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