Tuesday, November 14, 2006

Jupiter sinking
into sunset --
retirement party

-Deborah P Kolodji

5 Comments:

Blogger keiko said...

sadly beautiful.

1:59 am  
Blogger extraspecialbitter said...

...and such an unusual name for a retiree!

2:08 am  
Blogger laryalee said...

Enjoyed this, Debbie...
love the possible interpretations!
:-)
Lary

6:56 am  
Blogger polona said...

doesn't strike me as sad... i like the intriguing images

7:25 pm  
Blogger Area 17 said...

This didn't strike me as a scifiku at first, as I vividly remember travelling to Uluru with three planets so aligned we all thought it was just a large radio mast with warning lights for low flying planes.

Hmmm, it was Jupiter, Mars and Venus, all vertically aligned.

I like the fact that this is both haiku and scifiku. ;-)

7:33 pm  

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