Friday, December 08, 2006

a dusting of snow —
I wake up
before the alarm

2 Comments:

Blogger Alan Summers said...

Simple but evocative first line, I love dusting.

That first line really works with the rest of the haiku beautifully! It's one of those seemingly simple lines that all of a sudden lends great resonance to the rest of the haiku.

I'm jealous, no snow here yet!!!!

Boo hoo!!!! ;-)

8:17 pm  
Blogger sangeet said...

Very nice!

9:02 pm  

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