a dusting of snow —
I wake up
before the alarm
posted by extraspecialbitter at 1:45 pm
Friday, December 08, 2006
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2 Comments:
Simple but evocative first line, I love dusting.
That first line really works with the rest of the haiku beautifully! It's one of those seemingly simple lines that all of a sudden lends great resonance to the rest of the haiku.
I'm jealous, no snow here yet!!!!
Boo hoo!!!! ;-)
Very nice!
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